Couldn't hear it
I like this kind of thing but I couldn't hear the talking most of the time.
Reviews for "Dark Sonic Shorts"
Too quiet
Get a better microphone, a few better jokes and cut out the really bad bits of animation and you'll have something pretty ok then.
The thing i did like is the way you built up your scenes using components from different places and the pixel characters.
Keep trying.
So many errors!!!
I'm going to try not to be harsh, here, but you did NOT do a good job on this.
1. You made the sprites too large, which doesn't look good, at all. You need to compensate with a smaller screen size.
2. You didn't do very good voice acting. You need to practice doing the characters voice with friends, and if they don't think it sounds like the character don't do the voice.
3. You need an original idea before you make a joke. Please research carefully, then decide what and what not to use.
4. You're jokes weren't funny. I don't actually have anything to add to this one.
5. Tails isn't homosexual. Don't use "gay" as a derogatory term, even if it's a fact.
6. You didn't get your jokes to the punchline fast enough, try doing a collab with friends, then come back to doing solo work.
really bad voices
the voices were bad and i could nearly hear it!
-_-
*yawn*.......................lame