a few pointers.
im no flash writer. but as a veiwer, you might wanna work on one or two things. the idea you have for a story line looks great. but the way you fiddled with the original body structure of the madness series, idk it doesnt work well. i applaude you for experimenting. i mean putting muscle on them was a good idea. but to be honest its looks alot like a bunch of pears running around. i look forward to the movie. but take my advice seriously.
-Bogz