Off to a decent start of a possible good series.
Well, where to start really...
You followed the script alright and that opening scene always brings back good memories of playing the game for the very first time. But I did notice a few things, first of all, the soundtrack doesn't sound quite like it should. Like it didn't sound like it was from the video game. Also I hope you improve on the character designs and animation, for starters Marle's hair is a bit more goldish and orange-ish then the way you did it. Lucca looked crossed eyed to me. Also I'm hoping you'll fix that uploading issue you have, a custom icon would really help in setting this one apart from the other Chrono Trigger flashes on here.
Overall, I think this series has potential and you're not off to a horrid start by any means. Long as you continue to practice and improve those character designs, this series could turn out to be a hit.
I'm looking forward to episode 2.