The intro....SO GOOD!
The Intro synth pluck chord progression sounds really good! But when you added the kicks into it, i think the song was a bit...too sidekicked. If you made the synth yourself, i think you should lower the filter on it, and make it more saw-wave style(a slight saw wave. Not too heavy) Maybe do something like what you did at 2:05-2:38? That part sounded really good!
But I think everything else sounds good! i like where you put the white noise in, and nice build up! Nice job on the synth bleeps. I enjoyed it.
Keep up the Good work