Some more work, and it can be really good
Promising beginning , and the buildup was good. I liked the "Let the bass kick" voice but i felt that from :29 to :55 was not as good as anything before it. The ~2 second pause afterwards is ok, but i feel a transition of sorts would have been better, the nice sounding high pitched instrument introduced when the music starts again could have had some sort of a mini-buildup to lead into :58.
:58 - 1:26 is pretty good i have to say.
At 1:13 there is a short boop that is heard a few times. Its good as a little sound effect, but i think it should have more presence.
Im not too fond of the way it fades away then back up into 1:40.
I like 1:54- 2:17 , its interesting and has a better build up than the beginning, which is good because it should be getting more interesting.
The rest of the song is pretty much covered by what i have said already, but i didnt like the fade away , but the remaining sounds at the very end were good for an ending.
So keep working on this, it has more potential!