well...
as much as id like to not rate it bad, i am anyway. the artwork was passible, but i defintly think you could do a lot better with some time, think up a story, a plot, and keep improving. remember that few first submissions make it through the portal.
Una pena
Que aqui no importa si piedes piedad, borraran tu animacion si es mala, sin importar q sea la primera o la 10000nesima tiene q ser buena, si no estas seguro q tu aimacion sea buena, no la subas, esactamente lo que you hago.
Aunque hay ezfuerzo y ganas de triunfar, sugiero prectiques y q escribas o dibujes un story board antes de hacer cualquier cosa.
Hmm
You have a lot of potential for doing flash. Good job!
Meh.
The drawing was okay, yet it was very short, no sound, and could use a LOT of work.