Reviews for My very First Flash

[talkingtrousers]

Hey, awesome work man!

I Respect flash artists greatly, because even their first piece of work is better than mine, i have none! So congratulations but to make this better i'd include;

1) It's great, but if you plan to make a sequel, (it's totally nerdy) but check out a bitta dragonball z. :P Spirit bomb thing.. is always epic.

2) under personal opinion I hate all that japenese stuff, and when I mean that I mean you know, ever see the way Yugioh is? it's so cheesy. Get some straight english out there! Or alternatively, dont have any type, someone said have audio, or include nothing, thats spot on.

and 3) It'll be a bit harder, but why not have a few more stickmen on screen, jumping off things and wall jumping and all. Just a thing to make it more epic!

Great submission! Congratz on underdog.

Ichi-Kats26 responds:

man thx alot!!! thx for the tips and well....thankyou! lulz

[echotstud]

Pretty good

Definetily expand on this and add some things like the suggestions below.

Ichi-Kats26 responds:

kk u got it

[Patonki]

Nice

With a little work you could make a masterpiece. The animation was slick and quite flawless. The thing that bothered me was the unnesscesary speech. It is good that they talk, but you should make it in audio, or then cut down the amount of speech. Also the black "flashes" were annyoing and it would be better to replace them with a neater effect.

Otherwise very nice.

Ichi-Kats26 responds:

thx man^^

[MJMCartoonProduction]

good!

Thats good for a first flash!

Ichi-Kats26 responds:

lol thx man

[Chaos-Legacy]

You are on your way bro

The bad: No sound, to small, story kinda..... bla. (thats cool though, we don't watch stick animations for story lol) effects are still "noobish"

The good: Fluent animations and movement, fight was a bit quick but well done, and for your first flash, there is alot of potential here.

Full: Lets say you just stick with the Sticks (i made a joke). If you keep this up you could one day join the Shiftlimit boys in their quest for taking over Flash with just Stick Figures. There is room for improvement, but this is you're first flash so thats obvious. But you've done won Underdog of the week, thats pretty good and alone should say stick with it. Or lets say you get into more in depths and learn to really draw characters, then keep it up. Sticks are a good starting point, hoping to see more from you in the near future. Keep trying!

Ichi-Kats26 responds:

lol thx alot man^^