Hmm
For your first flash, this is pretty good. Keep it up.
Reviews for "My very First Flash"
Wow man it was da best 1st flash
It was the best 1st flash that a guy could ever made man every detail was good
*The small dust detail of the ground was awesome
*The animation was smooth
*The black thing covering the screen was bad it coul've just been a normal rectangle with alpha effects
*Sometimes the sticks kind looked corny
It was great
4/5 7/10
that was great!
for your first flash, that was really well done. if you go into the flash portal, youll see all sorts of crap. that wasn't peoples first. good job.
This is very nice for a first!
I liked it and i hope to see more good animations from you like this!
Oh and just a side note:
I do agree with RichGuy there should be some more effects.
Excelent
Totally awesome for your first flash :D
.. and you should change the title if you ever did make a second one :P
(and stop using those "black flashing" thingy)