Pretty good
I liked the song and the story of the flash, the animation was good considering its your first time. Good work.
Pretty good
I liked the song and the story of the flash, the animation was good considering its your first time. Good work.
for ur 1st flash good job
its alright man it could use some work!
great first flash
what I just said.
constructive citicism time!
too much white
the moving arms are no good.
Well,
It's not a bad idea for a story, and it has some heart in it. But the graphics and animation lack any sort of style whatsoever, and are very poorly executed. This detracts greatly from said storyline, making it impossible to relate to and hence useless.
But I didn't blam, because this entry obviously has some thought behind it.
When you're better at Flash, you could make something truly brilliant, methinks.