Cool.
Nice, funny flash, hope to see more work in the future!
Reviews for "Father & Son In: Trip"
I liked it
I really liked the part with the animal. Just the back and forth screaming made me laugh. lol just wondering, what is a prat?
CSanimations responds:
Oh, right!!!! Annoying idiot is what it means.
good
haha "boring park... " very good use of words
CSanimations responds:
Thanks... Words are just as importent as animation.
\m/
The storyline is very interesting and you had some very funny scenes in here (I espcecially liked the guy floating by in the background when Father & Son whent rafting).
The main downsinde here are the very rough graphics. Everything looks quite sloppy, with hardly any straight line in it.
Also, there are no shades in here, which looks a bit strange.
The animations looked decent. Only thing here was the scene when Father & Son went for a walk. It looked like they where on a speedwalk (only moving in the wrong direction), because the stones on the path moved faster than the trees in the foreground.
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CSanimations responds:
Thanks, and you're right, the graphics aren't amazing, but this whole thing was a learning process. I feel I'm now getting better, although shading and shadowing is still a problem. I didn't want to draw too many lines, because I wanted it to look a bit handmade, however, I don't think I quite pulled it off, which is a shame, because you're right, it does look a bit sloppy so that's a real shame.
But I'm glad you liked the animation, I did try my very best with that.
As for the walking bit, yeah, I still haven't quite cracked that, so I could use a few tips.
Thanks for such a good and constructive review.
:)
You are on the right path. ;)
Comments before actual review - Wow, two flashes reviewed in a row from me that have a lot of potential. These are the type of flashes that I really enjoy reviewing. :D They are so much better than reviewing the absolutely terrible flashes and the very good flashes.
Animation/Graphics - The main reason that you lost points from me. It was very rough and very unorganized. If you just worked on the animation part of your submission and worked on it until it was up to par then you would of probably received an 8 or 9 out of me on my review. Just clean somethings up and work on the smoothness of your animation. I'm sure this will come with time though. :)
Story - I liked the story line actually. This didn't really happen to you did it? lol, I hope not. I laughed very hard when the animal popped out of the bushes with the guys screaming back and forth with the animal and the kid swearing up a storm. Great humor and a fun flash to watch is what gave you the most points from me on my review.
Audio - Decent for the most part, but I would like to recommend laying off the mic just a little bit. Even when things are suppose to be loud back away from the mic a little bit so we don't get those extremely loud voices that we got. Other than that pretty decent voice acting.
Overall - It needs a lot of work in the terms of animation, but if you work on it than I'm sure this would be a great submission. Keep working hard.
C52
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CSanimations responds:
Thanks. I feel my graphics could be, and are, being improved in my stuff. As for the animation, I feel that yes, it could be improved a lot, and that I learnt a lot from it.
You see, I'm still working out how to improve - creativly & technically.
I know I should, but it's a slow process of thinking. For me, anyway.
As for the story, I'm glad you liked it, it wasn't really orginised, I just kept on adding more & more stuff to it. :)
I'm suprised you thought the audio was ok - I didn't like it that much, but thanks.
:)
Great review, I'll take it in mind.