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Reviews for "Untitlted Demo."

Eh.

If this was more that a demo you'd probably get a lower score, but seeing as you seem to be testing the waters to see how people like this engine, your game isn't bad.

What I'd suggest:
1. Work on the character design. Stick figures don't make a good impression on people. It's fine having one for the demo, but the final game will look much more pollished if you have a real character.

2. Give more control over your jumps and falling motions. I hated the way you just fell straight down or jumped striaght up or to the side. 99% of game developers did away with those kind of jumps in the nineties for a reason.

3. Put more detail into the ship design to give the game more polish, and make it so that you have to press space to enter a level. This will prevent people from accidentally entering levels when the screne becomes crowded with all the levels you've unlocked in the later stages of the game.

4. The level design is pretty good, although you could certainly enhance the graphics a bit. Also, it was a pain that you had to totally restart a level every time you died. Try added lives or something of that sort.

Other than those complaints, this isn't a bad game. Keep on working on it, and I hope to see you on the front page. :)

Twist-Chao06 responds:

I Put the Stickman in there just to test out the game. im thinking of the game name and character design, so dont worry about that.

There have been alot of reviews about the jumping, so sure ill fix that.

The Ship hasnt been designed yet so i just made something simple to put there for the time being. And The space to enter a world is a good idea.

Lives and Checkpoints are a good idea so i will make them.

Thank you very much for your critism.

Demo!!! Thank GOD!!!

I hope that the full game wont be as terrible as the demo.

Twist-Chao06 responds:

Thanks for the Critism i asked for.

Untitlted the game?

lol, this game is pretty fun, maybe make the levels more complex later on, I like how the first level was made, kind of introduced people on how it's going to work

some cons about it;

-character design was unoriginal
-the song kept playing after I died or beat the level
-you cannot move when falling
-you jump quite high, and that's hard to get used to

key word: potential, keep it up and you'll have a good game, just don't rush towards the end so we have a good game from begining to end

7/10 and a 3/5

Twist-Chao06 responds:

Character design etc is All Temporary. Jump Style will be impoved.

Definetly a Demo.

I can tell that this is a demo. I have a few suggestions. Have lives! Or if you won't have any lives, when the player dies, don't send him/her to the world select screen. Another thing is that you cannot control your jumps.You must go where your character was supposed to. This gave me problems on level 3. It's good otherwise, but with some work it could turn out to be a great game.

Twist-Chao06 responds:

thanks and yeah lives and Checkpoints are being worked on.

great

nice