Eeeeehh...
Good animation and body emotions, but the story feels slow and boring afer some minutes. sorry i didnt like it.
Reviews for "Appleville Ep 1"
mmm...
Reminds of the Nameless series oh well still liked it.
A good idea
I remember seeing this on the ABS forums, and I'm glad that you added to it, but the one thing that bothered me throughout this animation was the guy that wasn't a pineapple, because you seemed to be constantly changing him and just messing with him, It's fine that you occasionally give him some kind offacial feature, but really, you overdid it. It looked to me like you got a lot of inspirqation from Lazyboy. Just try to get all the touch ups done and improve your animation and keep the characters the same for most of it (Like at the milk store, the pineapple guy didnt have the sneakers he had in the begginning) and one last note, Make sure you fill in colors for things, like the guys hands at the milk store were just outlines sometimes.
FrozenSheep responds:
Yeah, the red guy is suppose to be constantly changing. As pointed out in the first scene where he walks out the door.
The rest are just mistakes.
:D
stats! here
Yeah a 7!!
Pros: (+13)
Random (+2)
well done (+5)
entertaining (+4)
Simple animation (+2)
Cons: (-6)
Voices sucked (-3)
no real story (-2)
a lil badly animated (-1)
Total: 13-6 = 7!
Good job, keep it up
7/10 3/5
FrozenSheep-10 Stars
That you deserve, another really well made flash, i enjoyed it ^_^, i couldnt suggest anything to improve them rather than length. Im sure i speak for everyone when i say "we want more"!