Lacks orignal content, but not bad for a 3rd try
The swearing at the 2nd part sounded very familar and i realised it was from a youtube video where a man was yelling at his cats, the 3rd a well known internet copy, it's not in my level to judge since i cannot do flash at all and can't comprehend how hard it is, but maybe you could use some more orignal content in your next flash?
The drawings was ok, not up to the standard out of most videos i like but not too bad for what seems to be your 3rd flash on newgrounds, keep at it and you'll probably create something really good one day, other then that try not to use a rectangle block of color for a running animation i realize shadow is as fast as sonic and the girl was probably scared out her life (2nd part), but still only streaks of color rather then a huge rectangle block of it would work slightly better though kudos to not totally copying the 3rd part by having the face appear with the lazer, well that's all i really have to say, just keep at it you'll get better at it and will probably make a really good flash one day