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Reviews for "-> PANCAKES!!! <-"

sorta fun

its pretty fun but its so easy to lose and its fun making ppl read alot!! :D

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

LOL its not that hard! I dont know why people think its so hard. >:|

FATSO

proper reyt good game

haha thought this random pankakey game was pretty good, in a crap way. Bad graphics, but i liked it. some funny text and that. Loved the fact that you had to shoot the fatties, was it a salad that you shoot them with? anyways, a proper reyt good game.

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

Yeah you have a salad gun. If you want to you can read the intro, even though it is kind of hard to read lmao.

(: pancakes nom nom nom

this game rocks xD i cant finish it tho the fat mens shirt says i <3 lard lmfao

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

Yeah I thought what a fat guys shirt would say.. so I put that in there. :D

Hmm

Well starting with the loading screen, I wasn't too impressed by being greated with a wall of text, if it was a fun font then I would have been more willing to read it, just stick a small comic or less text on the preloader if you want, anything more just seems too much to me. That aside and onto the actual content though.

The graphics are quite poor but I can get over that pretty quick since most of it seems to work fine, the game over animation is actually quite clever, most games don't do this often. Level desigin is poor at best, it's terrible to get to places since on the 2nd level, to jump back to the lift, you have no ledge to stand to jump so it's an impossible jump if you've already gone down.

Some of the monsters are hard to time it to shoot them, this got me most annoyed on the second level. The first level, it was much kinder with the timing. On the first level, there is a peice of collectable food stuck in the wall, what is the point of that? It's silly.

Layout of the menu, introduction and game over screen even all need some word, it just looks like it has been thrown together really quicky. Use smooth shapes rather than drawing your buttons out by hand and a much smoother roll over for a button would be good. Anyway, it's a decent start but needs much improvement graphics wise and in terms of level layout.

2/5

<3

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

Ok I appreciate you anaylizing the game so thoroughly. I realized that the game had very many flaws when I submitted it, but I decided to submit it with the flaws just to make it funnier. The wall of text you described is what most people enjoy, so I will not take this out.

In my next game, I am working with a pro animator and am designing everything with much more effort. Please understand this game was made by a 14 year old noob so all the flaws are GONNA BE THERE lol.

Funny

It was entertaining and funny and I liked reading the pointless stories about rampaging through town and ripping peoples limbs off. Awesome job :D

FatKidWitAJetPak responds:

Exactly what i like to hear. THanks. ;)