some things were a bit corny
the dbz styled dashes, the beam attacks trying to overcome each other, and some other things were a bit cheesy cuz those things were already overused. however ur sprite animation skills r almost as good if not better than MaxR's! not only that but ur plot makes ppl beg for more and keeps ppl eager for the next episode and for the finale! because of this i urge u not to give up like other potentially epic series have!