Pretty Good
I thought it was quite good. The story wasnt bad.
The main thing that annoyed me was the fact that there were just bits of VA. Instead of using ripped speech just voice act it all yourself, it would be much better. Otherwise just have the text there with no voice overs but a skip but so it can be cycled faster.
The battle scenes were pretty good aswell, albeit a bit on the short side.
Looking forward to the third episode!