Really good but...
you should be able to skip the bit at the begining where it says what happened in the other episodes. Other then that its a great addition to the series!
Reviews for "The Last Hour: Chapter 3"
Jaiba responds:
No way. you can't skip parts of the movie that took so much effort to do. But i'll think about it. thanks for reviewing. As promised my responds.
Hmm
Didn't actually watch much so have a nice review (:
Tbh I'm not into the biblical sorta thing
So I loaded it, closed, voted a 4, then gave you a nice review score and wrote this, but tbh I dont think anybody reads these things > >
Jaiba responds:
why thank you kind sir. and here is your reward for your efforts. responds +1
Good...
Well better than the other episodes, I can see you're improving, that's good. Not much action and animation though, and you should make the voices more...like it's actually happening you know? Overall 7.
Jaiba responds:
thank you kind sir for your review. as promised here is your +1 responds
Good
I like the star-wars like entrance. There is an improvement from what i've seen so far, this one is fairly decent. Keep at it!
Jaiba responds:
As promised I shall respond to all reviews! thank you for the review. the next one will be even better! be on the look out for the upcoming chapter 4 of the great legendary series, The Last Hour.
Scene 3
I'm glad that you've moved another step towards learning how to use the features of Flash properly. It's a learning curve and I'm glad to see that you're on it.
The pre-loader looked better this time, with the solid effect enabling us to see what was going on, rather than having it blended into the background. Though there still needs to be some work done on the grammar, I'll accept that this was already published to Newgrounds when I first passed comment on the grammar.
The drawing needs some work and I'm sure that it will come in time - lip sync is your next task, as you've managed to manipulate the mouths of the characters to open and closed in elipses. Now look at yourself in the mirror and work out what different shapes you need to form basic words. Get a small collection of these shapes and you'll have your basic mouths, which you can add in the correct situation. Getting them to line up with the sound can be tricky, but you seem to be doing alright at present.
When you record the sounds, try to be a little further from the mic, as there was quite a bit of static on the NOOOOOOOOOOO! part. Either that or turn the mic sensitivity down a little.
Don't forget, it's not just the mouths of the people that move - they can change facial expression, some talk using hand gestures and some just make expansive shrugs. Not everyone does this, so a blend will help.
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Jaiba responds:
the facial movements and hand gestures have been suggested and we have presented basic levels of what you have just noted. if you check out chapter 5 you can note that we have implemented the facial gestures and such into the movie. and we have worked on our voice acting. we bought 5 dollar mics instead of those cheap crappy ones that come with the sony tape recorders. now we are moving on up into the higher end spectrum of flash animation.