Hmm
Ok... but it doesnt deserve to be above Waterlollies.
Plus it wasn't very funny.
But the animation was good, so it gets a 6 from me!
Reviews for "Angry Dog - Blood Shower"
Not bad... In fact, I like it!
This was kind of a hit and miss with me. Compared to other flash submissions, this wasn't that all funny. Maybe I should wait and watch your second episode before I judge.
Nice work!
I agree with the others that the timing could have been better it seemed a little slow paced but if you can put in more humor like at the end I'm all over this toon. I'm going to keep posted on this anyway because that made me laugh harder than I have for a while now.
Thrown together
It jsut feels like some of the material was thrown into it, some of the lines. The voices on some of the characters aren't appealing to me either. The animations are good though, and you did develop a story out of a simple thing.
Looks nice, but I didn't laugh
The voice acting was decent, but certain parts were hard to hear. The animation of this flash was clean and followed perfectly with the voice acting. But I found it disappointing that I failed to laugh throughout the whole admission.
-The beginning scene could use some development for why the bear wants to take his life. Also the female bear can exaggerate that even thought she witnessed the death that in a few moments she wouldn't care about the bear.
-The business dog that received the blood bath should sound more stressed about being splashed with blood. Could use hand gesture of the palm being of top of the forehead to show the stress. When the dog throws the briefcase, it seem random. It would be more humorous if the dog roared in a funny way and then chuckle the breifcase with anger. Also when the dog speaks about the blood as a "local blood shower", it sounded rather weak as a chance for a funny moment. It would be funnier if the dog said it in a more darker tone and looked at the audience as a way to reveal a connection with the viewers about his stress/situation.
-Then with the lobster being in a situation of the mate stating how she wants him to meet her parents could be funnier if you included a monologue about how the lobster truly feels.
-Finally when the bear eats the fish, I could image the fish saying "Now I can't show him to my parents AAaaaAHAhhhh".