Good Animation
You have really good drawing skills, your animation is a just a bit slow you should make them flow faster, check out some of egoraptors submissions. But otherwise I think you could be a good flash maker with just a few tweaks good luck! :) and dont let other peoples nasty comments get you down they prob dont even know the 1st thing about making a flash heck i dont either lol.
thanks man. Im new to the whole thing still tbh an iv watched all of egos stuff one of my fav arttists but i no there is no way i could ever be as great as him. I did everything myself an with nothing fancy mouse crappy mic an slow comp ^_^ im just happy it got throught tbh fingerscrossed i get in the top ten for the compo
Not bad
I've messed around with flash... Its not easy...
You might want to try to make it flow a little better though.
I did notice that it actually sounded like he was talking into the carpet.
Nice effect.
Just no eyebrows...?
Anyways.... Good job for a second? try.
Just I noticed. Try to works on the eyes a bit. it would help
Anyways (again)
Good luck :D
yea its not easy at all an this is my best work to date an thats after more than a year of not working with it ^_^
Thanks for the tips, yea btw the voice for when he was in the carpet was me talking throught my hat lol XD
Yea but to make it flow better.... how could i do that? more fps or... wot?
Effort shown
It may not have been animated well, but this is your second flash and if you keep going you can only get better
thanks man im glad there are helpful people ^_^ i am going to contiune an make new flashes but it wont be edd style .... i have a few ideas that im going to try but untill then ^_^ thanks
A really weak spinoff of "TRON"...
A really weak spinoff of "TRON"... if you are old enough to remember that movie ;)
it aint no spin off its because edd loves SSBB an yea i am old enuf.
Oh btw when u get a flash through the portal. u can make a comment then
GREAT IDEA BUT THE ANIMATION -_-
EM GREAT IODEA BUT THE ANIMATION IS BAD ..
yea i did point out second animation dude. I understand people expect master pieces on newgrounds but ( in no way disrepectful ) people like egorapter an hans van harking make amazing flash an im not dissing it in fact i love there flashes, im just saying pros make it hard for people like me who are shit at art an animation.