Reviews for Desert (first flash)

[SlayerX3]

I hope it is the first of a serie

very well made and opens a plot to a great series
just go on and do it

HypeSystem responds:

damn guess if promises more than i intended. I see it, but i don't intend to do anymore like this one!
Anywho thanks a lot!

[xHeavyMetalx]

not bad

It was well written and the theme was good and best of all was the music. Anyways it needs some work but well done.

HypeSystem responds:

Thanks a lot for the honest review. I know it wasn't perfectly worked trough (it had some bad animations :P), but i intended it as a quick one, just to get myself started on flash :)

[TriForceForever]

suggestions

here are a few points you might wanna improve on:

try to make the animation smoother, it makes movement look much better
also, the tear in the white guys eye didnt really look like a tear at the scene from far away.
and finally, a slight sound effect and a short pause in the music should make the scene where the sword comes down a little bit more dramatic.

overall, a very good first flash, i hope to see more of you in the future!

HypeSystem responds:

Why thanks a lot!
To the smoothness, i have responded before, that it was made quick, to get myself started. Future projects of mine will be far more worked trough!

[Legacidal]

Cool

I liked it, especially the music. Nothing too fancy, but still a good a flow to it. I can relate as well to your status as a Flash artist. I'm not familiar with it and still learning how to use all the bells and whistles the program has, I'm sure my first animation won't be too entertaining.

But, I liked yours, good stuff. 7/10 3/5

HypeSystem responds:

thanks a lot!

[monkey]

nice

for a first animation this is pretty good. it had pretty good drawn people and, overall was prob. the second best 1st flash ive seen.

HypeSystem responds:

wow! thanks!