hm.
for a first flash it's alright .
better than my first, that's for sure. :)
but i'm still gonna give it a 2.
cause it looks like you've got a story, but it's too short.
and you should probably look for some flash tutorials...
cause if you did, i'm sure you'd be a great animator. ;3
and you should definetly set it to a higher fps. 24 would do just fine.
Ok! I will remember the fps thing :)
And thanks a lot!
Cool
I liked it, especially the music. Nothing too fancy, but still a good a flow to it. I can relate as well to your status as a Flash artist. I'm not familiar with it and still learning how to use all the bells and whistles the program has, I'm sure my first animation won't be too entertaining.
But, I liked yours, good stuff. 7/10 3/5
thanks a lot!
good for a first timer
the way you've drawn the scenery with a little practice you could become a great flash artist.
wooohoo thanks a lot!
suggestions
here are a few points you might wanna improve on:
try to make the animation smoother, it makes movement look much better
also, the tear in the white guys eye didnt really look like a tear at the scene from far away.
and finally, a slight sound effect and a short pause in the music should make the scene where the sword comes down a little bit more dramatic.
overall, a very good first flash, i hope to see more of you in the future!
Why thanks a lot!
To the smoothness, i have responded before, that it was made quick, to get myself started. Future projects of mine will be far more worked trough!
Not bad for your first flash.
But the animation was a bit choppy.
Yep i know :) but thanks