Well done on this track. For me, this track was a breath of fresh air because of it's general tone and the atmosphere it created. The lyrics are good, and the vocals contributed to the mood considerably.
The mood it created in me was a sort of... longing and sadness. If I shut my eyes, and let my thoughts drift, I found myself wandering through a broken and kind of industrial world, with dust blowing through the streets and everything grey, until I look up at the sky, and see the stars and moon shining in a black-blue sky. I lament, as it reminds me of Luna, who for one reason or another is not with me as she was before. That's what I get out of it, and not many tracks do that to me.
The only reason I'm not rating this five stars is because I try to only put five star ratings on tracks that absolutely blow me away. This track is really good, but, as I did enjoy the vocals, they still were not up to the par of mind-blown-ness. Still, nothing to be down about, they were good, just not that good. Overall, a song to be proud of, and I'll be watching your work now.
Desp