Reviews for Cheese & Mouse

[Spaltzer]

Interesting

It was alright. I can't really comment much on it other than that (as there's not really much to comment about). However, if you didn't intend for the cheese to stand out more than everything else, you might want to consider going with a consistent art style throughout your animation. I noticed that the Background/Desk/Mouse were all photos that were altered in Photoshop? Yet, the cheese was just drawn out.

As for the sounds, the best way to control audio within flash, and to have the most control, is to use Actionscript. I'll give you a small example:

CheeseSound = new Sound(this);
CheeseSound.attachSound("<insert linkage name of audio here>");
//This starts the sound at (Where in the audio clip it starts playing, Number of times it loops)
CheeseSound.start(0,1);

And I do believe the syntax to stop a sound is CheeseSound.stop; However, I'm not 100% positive on this. Anyways, that should work well for yeah! Good Luck.

OWRBtheo responds:

Yeah, thanks I see your point with the painting style, but I made this a year ago before i got my graphics tablet and was new to flash, so future animations will be far more interesting.

As for the sound, I've fixed it now, so that the animation is in sync with the music.

[MultiCanimefan]

Hmm

I see some potential with the concept, like a cat and mouse kind of thing only the mouse is the predator. But for me it somewhat dragged on towards the middle-end. It picked up when they both switched places, which caused some much needed tension, but I was expecting just a little bit more than what the ending was.

OWRBtheo responds:

It must have looked poop but I've fixed it now, the animation is synced with the music now so it should have more of a point :)

[Rust7]

its kind of funny

its kind of funny. the things that could use some different improvement is the graphics and make the music a little better and make it a little bit more intresting but thats mine opion. but still good job

OWRBtheo responds:

Yeah, thanks, i fixed the music so it syncs with the animation now

[chadwal1]

it was ok

idk about this one man, it was EXTREMELY SLOW.

and at the end it the mouse just jumps on the cheese?

OWRBtheo responds:

I realise it must look pointless at the moment but I've fixed it now, the animation is completely synced with the music.
That was the point of the animation infact

[schoolmike]

Waste of time!

I did not know what was going to happen next! This is just a cheese and a computer mouse just runing around the table! I'm not trying to be mean but its just boaring nothing special! It needs more work too.

OWRBtheo responds:

I do realise it's pointless, etc. But it was made when I was testing out flash, so thats why it's poop - surely everyone's first flash is poop :)