You know... i like it!
Funny humor *giggle*Not to bad thou,you should make more ^^
Reviews for "Mountain Top"
Funny
To be honest i found it very funny. ^^ Good work
played out like loonie toons
loonie toonie
7/10
not too shabby for amateur animation. random, sporadic fun mixed with likable characters. it needs fine tuning.
Could have done better.
A script does help work wonders on making jokes. Keep a note book or pen and paper nearby, if you think of a really good joke or something mild even, write it down. Having something to go by helps refine storyline or plot, it may be just based off of older cartoons, but it even helped classic cartoonist like Bob Clampett and Tex Avery to keep to a script or along the way make creative changes to some sort of guidelines. Perhaps editing sounds and not using repeated loops would help and making it longer as well would help. I think this is a pretty good flash, but there is definitely room for improvement.