pretty good
very good for your first... and i agree more mistakes would be cool but like make them different.. like instead of just falling maby have him flipping through the air or sumthin :P a cool i dea maby i dunno would be instead of a stage have it be like in a street running throught jumping over moving cars or sumthin lol have fun :)
yeah the next one is going to be a more city oriented theme instead of this, thanks for the comment
Good
Well I thought for a first animation that it was pretty good. The animation was well done and it was a simple but good concept.
Next time make it a bit longer and more to do etc. Also the sounds where he landed were just out of sync.
thanks for telling me about the landing sounds, the next one will hopefully have everything sync up right, and yes it will be longer
Good
I really good for your first animation but you should make it more fun like alot of mistakes or something like that !
hmm........ the whole mistake idea might make an appearance in the next flash, thanks for the review
Not bad for a first animation
It wasn't bad because there was one giant scene and you designed it pretty nice. When drawing stick figure movies, try to make the background more colorful and rich - that way, you will still have stick figures (which are fairly easy to animate) and a nice background that in your case you only need to draw once and then you are off to animate the stick figure. The animation was pretty nice, you just need some more experience to reach pro levels. I don't know what frame rate you used for this animation, I would say it's the default 12 frames per second. Try setting the frame rate to 20 frames per second or even more - you will have to draw more frames, but it would be worth it because you will get a clean, smooth animation. The sound was okay too. Overall, you have a good idea and so far you've come up with a nice way to make it real. Just keep improving youself and I'm sure you will make better and better animations. Good luck!
thanks for the advice, the next one will hopefully be a bit smoother and have a better quality than this one, i'm thinking about making a whole series and linking all the runs together in one flash
Pretty good
IF it had more detail, it would've been great. Still a good go though =] I liked it