suggestion
if your flash skills have become better, may i suggest that you take these flashes back to the drawing board and redo them, making them into something good. rather than putting out something that wouldn't get good reviews. also, the volume on the music was too loud. that is really something that should be leveled when making the flash rather than forcing the viewer to turn their speakers down. hope to see your future submissions.
Point Taken
Akatsuki? "Sunrise?"
-Little to no actual animation
-Music that was too loud
-Unoriginal, overused characters
-Little attention payed to script writing
-Zero voice acting
-Tenuous grasp of standard drawing techniques
All these are characteristics of animators who have not practiced enough, and by the looks of this animation, you need more practice.
Now I know I may sound harsh; you're probably new to flash or are 13 or both (since Naruto is predominately enjoyed by 13 year olds). My point still stands: you should practice for a long time on your own before you try submitting things. When I first got flash, I had the advantage of already being able to draw, but it still took me a long time to get anywhere near good enough to make something I was proud enough of to submit to Newgrounds. I made dozens of test animations that only myself and a few friends ever saw, and now I have an animation with a score over 4.0.
It's not a hunch, it's truth: a lot of practice is required before anyone gets good with anything artistic. Flash is no different. Sit down, draw for 6 months straight, and then try again. If you're not ready after 6 months of continuous hard work, I'll eat my hat.
I already said I made this a long time ago, geez
And about the music, I have a thought, turn your speakers down. I do enjoy the criticism but you don't know what I do today, I am a very good drawer and animator and I admit that I have grown sense I made this