Good for your first.
Its good for your first, but I can't vote high on it. BECAUSE, its not that great,but its your first.. Its good for your first.
Reviews for "First Flash Animation"
good stuff son
that was a good first, but:
1. use 30 fps, its more work, but also more clean
2. that was a good stick animatoin, u should practice on that more
3. U have inspired me to start animating myself
Decent start :)
Since you want to improve, I will give you tips.
- First off, name your flashes for their content. I hope you don't call the next one ''Second Flash Animation'' :P
- Add a background. Seriously, you don't know how much adding a background would improve your work. It doesn't has to be anything out of this world! Just a nice thing that blends well with the action going on.
- Control your sounds. It was a bit annoying at the end, so be careful about how your flash sounds.
- Make longer works. Since this is your first flash, it is OK, but make sure to make animation longer, even if that takes you more time. It is preferable that you make 5 long enough flashes than fifteen 10 seconds stuff.
- Try to move away from overused standards: stick fights, DBZ sounds and moves, etc. Find your own original way :)
Quite liked it actually.
It was better than most first flashes. But the bit at the end messed up my speakers.
Your on your way...
You told me to be honest and disregard that this is your first flash so i could only give you a 2/5.
But FYI it was reely good for a first one! Keep on going like dat, make it a lil longer (and perhaps not so loud on da screaming bit :P) and im sure ul do great!
Good luck!