HAH, WOW!
At LAST we get something worth of its score! this is excellent, i like the world you just did, it had so much atention in the background details and stuff, it looked very nice :D yet, i wish it was longer and had more stuff going on, it just feels too incomplete. i could easily count the actions in it :(
The music was great, very fitting :) im glad you choose audio portal songs, its great to give NG musicians some spotlight!
i hope to see more from this monster and from you :D you're very good!