Not bad
Its not bad for a poorly named flash...maybe make a stick rascists game?
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DikkopStudios responds:
I can't make games :( Movies are my thing
6/10
nice short but i think it can be improved in terms of depth of message and how it is presented
DikkopStudios responds:
I just started animating and this is what I got :) I didn't really think of any story, just that at the end the judge would throw the hammer lol.
decent
hey, not bad, but i prefered the elastic guys one. i dunno why. i thought the movements just wern't as good in this, especially the running. i mean i know you SAID its a style and that all us animators do the same stuff...but really your running and walking just looks poorly done.
i mean, you said in a comment on a review that you wanted to make the punches realistic...and generally if your gonna make realistic punches your walking should be realistic. i just think some of your movements need some work. especially the walking.
but looking past that it was pretty decent, i didnt think it was choppy or anything and the fights were decent. i liked the way it wasnt a normal ending and that the orange guy died :D. and overall athough it was short it was fairly entertaining and it looked like you had fun making it.
anyway if you just get the walking and some other movements improved i think it would really add to your animations. and seriously, we dont all just copy terkoizes style or anything, you can have a unique style whilst keeping good movements, my brush animations have a style that i havnt seen before and people like cosmoseth have totally different styles...yet they all have good movements. and i think thats what tman was trying to tell you.
anyway good job on the animation and i hope to see you make more :D
DikkopStudios responds:
Movement. Ok. Thanks for the advice dude. This time I wanted to make an animation with a little story, unlike the previous one. Actually I started animating it no knowing where I would end. Yes, it was fun to make :D
What I'm trying to say about the Terkoiz style stealing, not just his style, others too. It's hard to explain, so I won't :))
I will make more!!!!!! You 2?
ehhhh..
I'm a fellow stick animator, so just know that I'm for stick animations.
I'm having a big problem with the way your sticks move. No, it's not a style, it's just half assed, or not animated correctly. Also, your stick movements are just not smooth at all.
Look up some tutorials and see how to improve your movements and I'd give you a better score.
Just keep in mind that you need work with force in punches and with smoothneess. your animation is lacking those skills.
DikkopStudios responds:
Trust me, it's a style. The stuff you people do is all the same, that's why it doesn't get populair. I'm pretty sure I can animate like that but it's so unoriginal. I hate all the kamehameha's and super pwnage moves now.
Please stop reviewing my movies if you don't like them.
Pretty much agreed
I mean, it was entertaining, just work on easing and anticipation. Also throw some variation into the moves.
Also work on movements, as tman said. Just keep practicing.
DikkopStudios responds:
It's just a try of a different style again :)