'Twas Okay.
Fuck You #1 - Don't just straight up convert your shit from youtube.
Since you moved live action into flash, why not take advantage of flash's benefits. Create a chapter select, a next button, fast forward, something. You could have hidden bonus Fuck Yous as easter eggs. That would be pretty cool. It would make us feel like you really respect and understand Flash and Newgrounds. And it would make it seem like you put extra work into it for us, instead of just having a friend convert the formats. What we don't want is an influx of people posting shit from Youtube into Newgrounds, so if you're gonna do it, DO IT RIGHT!
As for the video . . .
I'm barely familiar with online gaming, but the video was well developed, pointed, and with a pretty good write. I can't really comment on plot, characters, or lighting, but your sound was quite good, and the actor had a good voice, with nice levels and gestures.
Well done, but still. Fuck You. :)