Nice
Really nice, but you should change the audience from Teen to Mature.
Nice
Really nice, but you should change the audience from Teen to Mature.
I don't think this is Mature material as it doesn't contain so much violence and doesn't have much cursing either and "Teen" would mean person between 13-18 in Newgrounds terms I think.
was ok
It was alright made me laugh
Glad it made you do that.
Thanks for the review.
Meh
Wasn't bad, but it didn't stick well with me. The animation was done pretty well but I guess the main part I didn't like is how you directly referred to Snake as "Game Character" rather than a situational based character. Joke execution needs a little work imo.
Overall, one thing this piece does have is nice smooth animation and clean characters so I will give you that. I just thing some of the story elements should have been better executed.
Yep, this looked a lot better on the script instead of animation.
But thanks for your opinions here.
In a word: Inconsistent.
Mostly because at first, it stops time, THEN they're just not allowed to shoot.
Plus, the way you broke the fourth wall was kind of clumsy.
Other than that, it's a good flash.
Yep yep, could have done better job there and there but... Lazyness.exe overrided the system in my brains, or somethin' as weird as that, heh.
Thanks for the review.
damnit?
was good animation n all but when he said damnit he didn't like say it right and just kinda annoyed me, and it's snake...snake??? SNAKE!!! 3 snakes not friggin 2 obviously doesn't play it enough to know the correct phrases!