Don't know much about dubstep, but I like this.
My knowledge of dubstep as a genre is sadly limited to YouTube-posted remixes of existing songs, so I can't really offer any opinion regarding the quality in relation to genre. I can, however, say that I enjoyed this track. The portion from about 0:33 through 0:59 is my favourite bit; something about the sounds going on just really appeals to me. (The rest, of course, also appeals to me or I wouldn't have given a 10.)
The lyrics are somewhat simple but not overly so, and fit perfectly with the overall mood of the track. I like that you added a story to explain and go along with it, as well.
I agree with one of the other reviews: this is what Eiffel 65 should have become. And it might sound odd, but I found that this track is great background music to inspire my writing.