You're right- it was short.
But it was still pretty entertaining. I applaud your choice of music, too.
Reviews for "The Dentist..."
it good
not bad
Artsy, yet Dull
The animation was fine, and I loved the sound (music, voice), but I didn't find it all that enjoyable to watch all the same. With a better script, it would have been really great. To be honest I didn't know whether I was supposed to chuckle or not by the end of it.
luke2to1 responds:
Thanks. You see I did have a longer story worked out but I got kind of lazy and only filmed the climax. I think i'll redo it from the begining. Thanks again for your comment.
Hmm..
It's good, not great, keep working at it..
As you yourself said, "super short short",
I'm pretty certain the concept has been done before, sadistic dentists office, he pulls out a chainsaw and murders you because you haven't been brushing/flossing/whatever.
I smiled when I saw the surrounding objects, continued when the dentist pulled out the magnifying glass, expecting a gruesome death when I saw the cavity, I full out laugh at the chainsaw, but only for a second because it's sorta ruined by the.. geyser-like motion of the blood? I feel you could've expanded on that, but we are all pressed for time.. It's best to save these things, and work on them when you have time, rather than releasing whatever you have as soon as you think it's presentable. This was good, but for a flash to become a masterpiece, it needs to have more plot, and length.
Best of luck of future flashes,
Getting there
I liked the idea, liked where it was going, and i liked the coloring. That wasn't too bad. But you need to add some better blood, and some better sound quality. I am sure you can do better, and i for some reason am drawn to your strange work. So you must be doing something right, keep up the good work!