I'm intrigued.
You say this one was lame compared to the more recent scenes you've done. As this was pretty good already, I'm sure the series will be a hit.
Reviews for "Asaroki 01- The Outsider"
It was pretty good
Your drawings and animations were spot on, I mean good. They set the mood excellently. Everything flowed really well. But one thing I hated, was how corny it was. Like the be careful, it's dark thing. Just killed the whole thing, sorry to say. It just didn't seem believable that a person would run to the scene where someone just got killed. Although this wasn't a horrible thing and didn't ruin your video completely, it really bothered me. Even with this set back, the scene stayed eerie and creepy, and I didn't find an audio glitch, everything sounded fine to me, and I could make out what she said easily. Great job. I'm looking forward to the next one.
Good Stuff
Good job, but you definitly need to clean up the walk animations. As well as lengthening the legs. But great 1st parter.
good art
good art but the sounds of the footsteps and the ball bouncing on the dirt ground sounded off and i cant figure out whats going on from this scene but i will probally
check on episode two
Nice.
Fix the walking animation and make the legs longer and you got something nice here