I love this.
I loved the poem. Animation and all is great too. Only thing: the last line isn't schronized, ao that after you said it, it appears.
9 and 5, for a lovely poem.
darkdragons1
Reviews for "The Burning Skies"
Jestercap13 responds:
thanx man, yeah the last part when i animated it it work fine but when i watched it it wasnt so i really dont know what happened oh well
Great job =]
Its awsome! I love the poem, animation,voice, and
sound, also font =]. But theres somthing missing =/
Jestercap13 responds:
yeah, its to short, ill try and make the next one longer, but glad you liked it
hah, nice one
i actually laughed because the beginning sounded like the dude from the "emo song" but hey, overall i liked it and it was DIFFERENT from other stuff recently added. nice animation. i like the delay at the end on the final flash too.
Jestercap13 responds:
emo song! lol, mabey i do just a little. glad you liked it and i love the delay thing to lol
Nice poem and great animation
Great job. This submission was diffrent and brought something new to the Flash Portal. I'm honestly not that interested in poetry and had low expectations for this flash but you've proved me wrong. The poem had excellent writing for a simple A,B rhyme scheme and it flowed nicely with the piano filled background music. The stylized subtitles were a nice addition to the already clearly spoken words. Now onto my favorite part of this flash, which would be the animation. I loved how you animated the lightning strikes throughout the submission and the character looked nice as well, with his long jacket flowing through the wind. All in all this is a great flash well deserving of a 9/10.
Jestercap13 responds:
wow, thanx man. most people dont think much of poetry and i my self am still learning A, B is so far and most likely will always be the easy one lol, glad you liked it.
wow.
i only just found ur work today, and youre already on my fav artists list (:
cant wait for more.