Very good, and it can improve a lot to :D
What really bugged me in this movie was the fact that it doesn't have sound effects. Also, the BGM stops abruptly from trak 1 to 2 and at the end of track 2 (my english is bad, so I hope I have made myself clear without being misundertood or a total moron xD)
I liked the idea, I liked the movie, and I hope to see new cartoon youu're making.