It was long
This submission was long and there was a lot of killing but this had many problems. First of all this was very slow paced so I'd increase the frame rate. This wouldn't be much of a problem if the opponents weren't mentally retarded. The opponents practically just stood there and did nothing, just target practice. The entire thing was boring, even the boss fights. At least you put in music though. You should also try to make a story. Hopefully you do better next time.