Good Mixes
The sounds really compiment each other quite well in this, good drum lines and an interesting beat. Would love to see what you came up with on a project with more pace and tempo, maybe a little more bassy. But this mix is great really mellowed and listenable vibes.
It's good.
I like how you began the song. The drums and bass were introduced fairly well. This bass melody was a good choice to start with. I have to say, I'm not a fan of the "ung" noises, but it's personal taste. I think you may have more sucess with the "ung" if you were to tone down the volume a little. I also think it might be interesting to introduce a key change, even this early in the song. At ~1:28 you reduced the song to just the drums. Reduction of a song to set up a change in melody can be an effective technique, but you might consider buffing it with something else. Even a two note synthetic suspended chord would do wonders for your lull. Crescendos and decrescendos might be good to use with the chord. A key change could fit in here too. I like your melody at 1:43.
On the whole this is a fairly well balanced song. I think the introduction of an electric violin for part of a layered melody would've fit this song perfectly and given it a more dynamic vibe. I think you should definitely experiment with key changes, it'll give your song a more "alive" feeling to it. I guess the bottom line is: experiment with different feels and vibes in your songs by switching up chord progressions and experimenting with key changes. I think it'll really give it more vibrance and emotion.
Variety
add some more variety otherwise its ok
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nice shit i like the transition at 1:13.
im not a house kinda dude but i appreciate it ya dig?
seems like some parts it needs to have more instros playing at one time.
you know? make me wanna get up and start dancin!
i like it good job
very interesting
The beat keeps me sucked in and waiting for more but it could use a little more pazzaz