That was awesome
I havent seen an hentai game in a while, (maybe because I dont look for them),
But that was by far one of the best I have ever seen, I thad violence, money shots, tits, and cutting of some kids dick. I would HIGHLY reccomend making some more. There is always room for this. You have talent with drawing, so dont be afraid to try and change up the shit.
I dont know who the characters are, but if they are from an anime, make it an anime people are familiar with?