yes!
It was really good. The words and rhyming scheme were written excellently. You have a very creative mind. The only thing I would change is your voice. You have created this character and made him move, but a signature voice would really bring him to life.
has a good flow to it
lol right at the end he says pirates are assholes ............
but if you ask me there still beter than ninjas
at leaast pirates are phisicly possible
pirates
lol pirates are assholes^_^....forget ninja and pirates Monks are the way to go!
Man, that's awesome.
Lemon Demon's voice is perfect for this.
Great ending too. Nice job, overall.
D'aaaw
That was cute. I really liked that.