good at the start...
It had a good beginning and I thought it was going somewhere but.... well you know...
good at the start...
It had a good beginning and I thought it was going somewhere but.... well you know...
Nothing Tooo Special,,,
Nothing Tooo Special... But still a smooth Effort, But your Style is different, different to what i'd assume NG Citizens wouldn't accept, so, Submit this on Different sites aswell, Like Stickpageportal... Work on Making it longer, and Work on sound, Humour, and most Good Toons Are made great by just adding an opening that sets a story, Such as a Flashback... other than that, the Only Dissapointment was the Lack of duration...
Still Good, 3/5
Average, Nothing Special About it...
Still good, still good....
Yes i submit all my work to SFDT.com And Deviantart too
reasonable
the shat comment at the end kinda ruined it for me
good idea
i thot it was okay