y u no have full version?
The part from 0:11 - 0:34 would fit perfectly in a movie/game. Too bad this is just the preview. I'm pretty sure that if it was the full version, more people would download and rate it or actually use it in their projects including myself.
Better not leave it a preview, girl. This shows a lot of promise.
Good luck in your future works. Keep it up! 9/10 (because it's unfinished)