Sorry if i kinda didn't understand
Sorry if i kinda didn't understand the whole film. all i saw was mario and luigi messing with a sound machiene.
I will be easy on you though, keep trying and you will be succsessful
Reviews for "Super Mario Bros."
marink227 responds:
iss ok but thanx for the review!~
huh....
Sound is a good thing when it comes to a movie. So does the drawings and the animation... If I really wanted to be nice I would give ya something good for a rating. However this is your first video so i can be easy on you. Your getting there. Add sound and practice your drawings, you will one day be good. For now I give you a 2/5 and a 4/10. Now just because people are giving you low scores and stuff doesn't mean you should give up. Keep trying. You will succeed one day.
marink227 responds:
one day eh?.....
sorry if this is not nice
sound is a part of great movie and if making drawings are hard try sprite (looks better if only sprite and you need credit)eather wise not bad.
No offense
I know this is your first flash, but it needs a lot more work.
Not only the design, but you need to work more on the animation itself.
Remember to put audio in your second flash ;)
Not that bad really,
Though it could use some work...
Sound- no biggie, its your first flash. we here at newgrounds understand it takes a while to find a source for sounds :P.
Video- this is the thing that could make it not pass... sadly. The story was cool, i enjoyed that part, but the animation could be smoother. just practice, and you will improve :D.
good job on this, I hope to see more from you. 6/10 3/5
marink227 responds:
thanx you will see more from me!