All right
It felt more like a comic strip being read, but decent enough anyway. Bonus points for referencing Battle Royale....Though it's with an "e"...and you spelled "necessary" incorrectly...Those don't matter at all really, just something to work on if you're going to keep up in flashes similar to this, the spelling. If it wasn't taken from a comic, or you haven't done this already, I'd say just start it as a strip instead. Also, the Tankmen references feel strained, might want to just develop your own style and leave that out.