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well the music at the beginning was terrible made no relevance to the actual film itself, the actualy storyline itself well lets face it the loading screen had more storyline than the film, in general quite a bad film. dont give up though keep going and one day you will get there
awesome work
your work will surely be an inspiration to future generations of flash artists
Hmmm censorship
I gave this flash a bad review when it was still under judgement and I see that review got deleted. Right, so we can just flag non abusive reviews free of vulgarity and hate as abusive now? I can play that game too now I guess.
Oh yeah, this flash is not worth your time. It wasn't when I wrote the first review for it and it still isn't now that I have t take the time to write another. I think people should stop abusing the flag process just because they disagree with what a reviewer says.
Newsflash: do not want a negative critique, then do not make and submit stuff that earns negative feedback.
but i love your reviews queenofsuccubi
No.
Your grammar. Bad
Your art. Bad.
Your writing. Terrible.
Your timing. Awful.
Putting BLACK text on a BLACK background. Stupid.
Please tell me this was some kind of sick, cruel joke.
boring
It was horrible. The animation was O.K. but the plot made no sense. Plus I could not read any of the text because it was black on black. This was one of the worst things I have ever seen. Try making a text box so everyone could read it.