What did I think?
I thought that it was very good. The whole thing was very interesting and showed that you have a great talent for drawing.
The last part was very impressive, when you had the wide angle lens effect. That look really cool.
I'm taking away points because it simply wasn't long enough, and although it was well animated, it still lacked colour. The fact that it was so short put me off giving you a high score, so instead I'll give you a decent score.
I think that you have a lot of potential when it comes to animating, so you shoul apply yourself more. If you did you could have a very good animation on your hands. Maybe get together with some friends and think of one.
Best of luck in the future with all your animations.
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