Good, but you can do better
Not a bad job, but the text is too much faster and I wasn't able to read everything. During some scene the background is too much dark to read something..
you need a slower text and a white background behind.
Reviews for "Spatchcock Gourmet Pizza"
it got boring after a while...
hearing him say gourmet shit all the time was funny at first btu then it just got boring. you need to expand it into an interesting story or cut it short.
original
it was original but there wasnt much in there that was funny. the narrator was cool though.
Eh... Complete miss for me.
I'm all for random comedy, but the tone of this whole flash was the same and I didn't get any spikes of laughter... I mean, you pulled off the boring worker well... But realism wasn't entertaining.
Just couldn't get into this one at all, 2/5 and 3/10. Try varying the mood in your flashes and the delivery would be a LOT better.
OMG!
why did you rate this for evry1? it has cursing in it. ALOT. maybe thats becuse you have no vocabalary? ya thats it you have no vocabalary or at least not alot!