I loved it
While I love Gunslinger Girl as an anime, this flash is really good....but for your section on describing Gunslinger Girl, I would like to say that the only reason Henrietta goes 'berserk' in the first episode is due to the fact that she feels a bond to Jose that is on a personal level as you already know as a fan but most people who don't know might get confused about that...also Triela is pro with alot more guns that just the shotgun, and Rico is more than just a sniper....and the Agency isn't shady as you put it, they're just like any other national/federal agency in the world... meant to protect their country from terrorists and stuff like that...overall I love this flash and the comedy in it is really awesome....looking forward to seeing more of your works in the future...and the preloader is so cute....