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That's a healthy bass sound you got there. You definitely know how to sequence parts together and you got an ear for abstract sounds.
My suggestion for you is to compose a hook within the first 20 seconds to tease the listener enough that they don't click fast forward. The song was satisfying but I felt like it needed a personal touch - possibly some one shots that you can call your style. Try to go outside the box and add in some snippets like a trance melody, a sequence of pretty notes or a bunch of sound bytes you smashed together in a fun way.
Keep it up :)
~RedSe7en