Fantastic
First, mad props to you sir. Second I would just like to comment that your mic quality is not the best in the world (for example when you say words with 'p' and 'b' in them a puff of air hits the mic. and sometimes your breath creates white noise as well. other than that this song is wonderful.
The few
You are one of the few people on NG that actually give out TRUE music as a whole, meaning that you give your own beat, lyrics, and motion to the songs. Dont get me wrong, other people do give new beats and do add there style to song, but they only give beats and rhythmic tones. I admire the work and thought you put in this song even thou it was only 2 days lol. good work and i hope to hear more songs like this :)
Lol, I believe everyone has something to give :3 If it came from their heart, it's true music! I'm glad to hear you like my stuff more than some of the others, but everyone's ideas are worth listening to! And dude, don't misinterpret me; it was 2 days of NONSTOP work on this thing! I really did an effort! It wasn't like, some half-assed project XD
Anyway, thanks for your comment! =D
Amazing
This song is amazing, I'm surprised this isn't on iTunes. The song is great, You have a really good voice that you need to bring out to the rest of the world.
Idk how to get it on iTunes =( I might look into it since you suggest so. I'm glad you like it! Thanks a lot!! =D
Very good
However there are a few rough spots with the recording, in the second line when you say "pushing" there's some weird noise in the "pu" syllable, and I can hear you breathing in the "I" of the first "Well I will not fall". There are some more minor problems but overall it's pretty good.
Yes, and thank you for pointing them out, sir! Unfortunately, I lack a LOT of recording, editing, mastering; studio experience. I haven't gotten around to going to an actual studio and my equipment is pretty bad! And, I'm bad at recording myself XD I'll try to fix them! Thank you for the feedback!! =D
Hm...
so...whens' this gonna be on iTunes? Seriously, i love your voice. and this song is beautiful.
I have no idea how to go on iTunes D= But I'm glad you like the song and my voice!! Thanks a lot!! =D